10 Rules of Manager

9/8/2014

25 Comments

Open 5 Rules of Managers in Assignment.
Comment on 5 other Rules of Managers

1. What do you like about the rules?
2. Provide critical feedback to the student. (What could be improved?)
Example: To student *, I like your rules because ..... I suggest that you ......... because ....

25 Comments

Mr Ho

9/11/2014 06:34:30 am

To Student 1
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To Student 2
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Nick F

10/8/2014 02:51:39 pm

To Natalie,
Your Rules were great, and your layout was labeled perfectly. also, everything is neat and tidy. but it could use a little more detail.

To Dante, The layout was good and you had some pictures, but it needed a little more color, because it seemed a little bit bland.

Henrito Palomo

9/11/2014 06:47:07 am

To Dante,
I really like the colours and pictures you put in your assignment. It shows that you put a lot of effort into this. The rules are very logical and I like how you underlined what the main part of the rule was. It makes perfect sense.
I think that you should make some of your rules a little bit longer because some of them need more explanation. Such as “Keep where you sit clean”. Explain further and use better grammar. For example “Keep the area around you clean and tidy so that it is useable for the next user”
Other than that, it’s really great.

yeah.

Natalie Santoro

9/11/2014 06:48:23 am

Dear Calvin,
I like the way you kept your rules nice and neat. The layout was very well designed. I like how you used multiple pictures in this document. Overall, it was very well organized. I believe you could have added a tad more detail in your assignment. I suggest that you add more detail next time.

Dear Nicholas,
I like the font you used and how it emphasized the title of your rules. It was very neat overall. I believe you could have explained your points a bit more.

Dear Dante,
I like how your title is very large and bright and catches the reader’s eye. I also like how you underlined the key words. I believe and suggest that you explain your points a bit better next time.

Dear Kristian,
I like how you used different colours for different points of your assignment. I believe you could have made your title a bit larger and more noticeable.

Dear Mark,
Your assignment is the best assignment I have seen so far. It is very neat. I suggest you explain your points a bit more and add more detail.

Henrito Palomo

9/11/2014 06:56:12 am

To Mark-Josh
I really like the colours and pictures you put in your assignment. It really pops and makes the rules stand out. It shows that you put a lot of work into this.
I think that you should make some of the rules a little bit longer because they aren’t detailed enough
otherwise good work *highfive*

Calvin

9/11/2014 07:02:57 am

To: Natalie Santoro
Your rules are well organized and good 
I believe you can space every time a new rule starts, and add a few more pictures to improve your 10 rules, but overall it’s good.

To: Dominic
I like your 9th rule since it’s true, you are being marked for YOUR own work.
I believe you should add more pictures to improve your rules, but overall it’s simple and easy to follow.

To: Anastasia
I like your 10th rule because listening equals learning.
I believe you shouldn’t use too many fonts because it confuses people, but overall good job.

To: Elizabeth
I like the pictures you used, and the 5th rules because it’s unfair copying another work, and you’re right.
I believe you should space out more each rule or bold the important sections, but it’s good.

To: Henrito
I like all your rules since its simple to follow.
I believe you shouldn’t add a picture on the words, also add some bold words and fonts for the important sections, but good simple rules 

Sabrina Gargaro

9/11/2014 07:05:32 am

To Johannah from Sabrina 

What I like about your rules is that they are very detailed and that you have really nice pictures and there is nothing to be improve. I think it is very good.
To Elizabeth from Sabrina
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What I like about your rules is that they have a lot of information in it and you have really nice pictures and there is nothing to be improve. It is really good.
To Nicholas from Sabrina
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What I like about your rules is that they are very detailed and lots of information. The only thing that you have to improve is to have more pictures.
To Dimitri from Sabrina
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What I like about your rules is that they have lots of information and that there is a lot of detailed. The only thing that you have to improve is to add more pictures.
To Victoria from Sabrina
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What I like about your rulers is that they are very detailed and have lots of information in it and there is nothing to improve.

Robbie agostini

9/11/2014 07:09:53 am

To Matei,
I really like the pictures you have included in your 10 computer lab rules and the detail you put in each rule.
I believe you could improve on putting a little more detail into your pictures.
To Maddy,
I really like the colors you chose to make the words pop out.
I believe you could improve your project by adding more pictures and adding a background.
To Henrito,
I really like how you put good detail in your in to all of your rules.
I believe you could improve by adding more pictures and color.
To Mark H,
I really like how put a lot of color and boarders around all of yours rules to stand out.
I believe you could improve by making most of your rules have a little more detail.
To Dante,
I really like how you put a lot of pictures and how there beside each rule.
I believe you could add more color and a background to make the project look better.

Johannah

9/11/2014 07:11:53 am

To Elizabeth,
1. I like your pictures, the layout of your work and that u put a lot of information on every rule that you put.
2. Some improvements would be, making it more organize and not putting the pictures all over the place so it won’t look messy.
To Sabrina,
1. I like all the colorful sentences and all the pictures. I also like how everything stands out, and it creates excitement in the paper.
2. Some improvements would be making the sentences all one color. Some of the color on your sentences goes with the background, so you can’t really read it. But most importantly you could’ve put more details in your sentences.
To Anastasia,
1. I like the color of your background, and the different fonts of your sentences.
2. Some improvements would be, to put more pictures, not just only one picture because putting a bit more pictures would made it more interesting.
To Natalie,
1. I like how you made the important sentences and the details different colors because the red catches my attention.
2. What you could’ve improved on, is to put more pictures to make it more interesting.
To Minsu,
1. I like your background to make it more interesting, and putting a lot of pictures.
2. Some improvements would be, putting a bit more colorful pictures or different colors of fonts, so it would catch more attraction.

Matei Penelea

9/11/2014 07:13:41 am

To Josh,
I really like the way you have made the rules more for children than for adults, and I also like how you decorated your page.
I believe you could improve by putting a little bit more information in your rules. You could be a little more description. It feels a little “empty”.
Otherwise, good work.
To Cameron
In your rules, I really like the way you have made it pop-up and colorful. I also really like the way you made all the important words red, to show emphasis. It really shows that you put a lot of effort in doing it.
I believe you could improve by describing your rules more. Also, you could use some better grammar, and don’t forget to add apostrophes.
Otherwise, good work.
To Robbie
I really like the way you designed your rules. The new background is a really nice touch. It proves that you used all of your time and effort into this assignment. I also really like the way you put a new type of font on your screen.
I believe you could improve by changing the font color or making the background a bit lighter. The writing can be a little hard to see sometimes. Also you could put a little bit more detail in the rules, to describe them further.
Otherwise, good work.
To Mark,
I really like the way you made your rules look professional. It looks like it could be in a real office. I like the rules that you included in your assignment, and how you changed the font to make it look more colorful.
I believe you could improve it by adding a bit more color to it. It looks a bit too blank and a bit too simple.
Otherwise, good work.
To Michael,
I really like the background of the assignment, and how it relates to the computer assignment. I also like how professional it looks.
I believe it could improve by adding more detail to the rules, and describing the more.
Otherwise, good work.

Dimitri Adamis

9/11/2014 07:16:37 am

1) To Henrito Palomo: I think your rules need to stand out more. They’re not a lot of pictures and it makes your work look dry. I think you did a good job with your explanation of your rules but the visual aspect of your work could be better. Good effort 
2) To Bethel Zecharies: I really liked your work! Your rules are greatly explained with detail and the way you presented your work is nice and neat. The only thing I can say to you that could improve your work could be to add more pictures. Other than that excellent work. 
3) To Sabrina Gargaro: When I saw your work, the first thing that came to mind was that you didn’t put a lot of effort into it.  They’re a lot of spelling mistakes that can easily be prevented. You can barely see the words through the pictures and from a visual point of view, it’s not that appealing. On the plus note, I really enjoyed the pictures you chose because they really matched the topic and they were interesting to look at. Good effort 
4) To Madelene Casciato: I liked the pictures you used for your project. On the other hand, I think you could have described each rule better and more descriptively. I also think you could have added a background to make your work standout. Good job. 
5) To: Nicholas Ferraro: I liked the way you underlined key phrases in your rules. What I think you could have improved on were your pictures, the format in which you did your presentation in, and your visual aspect of your project. Good effort. 

dante

9/11/2014 07:17:06 am

1 #1 were good rules but it is a bit blan and does not look good
2 amazing I loved the pictures and colors and it has a certain fazaz to it
3 colorful and funny just doesn’t mean serious
3 Natalie’s is amazing super static and funny it is the best one I read all day
4 victories is a wonderful work of art it has every rule you would need
5 Nicholas a Ferrero is not a good one it is blan and doesn’t have a lot of coulor and has boring pictures

Elizabeth

9/11/2014 07:18:30 am

Dear Johanna,
I really like use of pictures. They went well with the rules you wrote. Also, I liked two of your rules in particular. They are: use your time wisely and save all your work. They are unique and important ideas. In order to improve, you should explain all your ideas in stand of most of them. You did not explain rule number 9.
Dear Sabrina,
I like your picture in the background and your colorful font. They make your rules look happy and inviting. Also, I like the smiley face at the end of question 10. In order to improve, you can explain your ideas. It would let the reader understand the rules better.
Dear Calvin,
I like the pictures that you used. They are very to the point. Also, I like your smiley face at the end of question ten. In order to improve, you could write in more detail. By doing so you could get the reader to understand you better.
Dear Henrito,
I like your picture of a light bulb and rule number 10. They both made me smile. In order to improve your work you could add more pictures and explain all your work. By add more pictures, you can make your work look more inviting. By explaining your work more, your reader can understand you better.
Dear Dimitri,
I like your background and your colorful font. They are both very eye catching. In order to improve you’re your you and try to make your font easier to read. That way the reader your find it easier to reader your work.

Minsu Kim

9/11/2014 07:18:42 am

To Kyle
Your rules are very good. because they are very specific. I suggest you put more pictures.
To Dante
Your rules and pictures look very good because they are very neat.
I suggest you add more words.
To Victoria
Your like your work because it's well-organized.
I suggest you be more specific.
To Christian
I like your work because pictures are so funny and I suggest you add more sentences.
To Natalie
I like your work because they are so clean and neat.
I suggest you put more pictures.

Kyle I

9/11/2014 07:19:30 am

To Kim
1. I like your rules, and overall meaning to all of them.
2.you work was great but, you need to add more details, for people to understand it more clearly other than that your work was awesome.

To Henrito
1.The work you did was good and interesting.
2. The light bulb on your work is covering your work, it would look better it you added it as a background, instead of it blocking your words.

To Michael
1. your work was amazing and the rules look good.
2. the look of your work looked bland and not appealing.

To Matei
1. Your work was great, nice background and pictures for your work.
2.Work was great but, the background should be changed, because it's distraction when reading the rules you made.

To Eduardo
1. Great work, best so far i've seen. Rules are great and the overall look is great.
2. the background is kind of distracting, other than that great work!

To Dante
1. Looks good and great choices on the rules.
2. everything looks rushed if you took your time it would have been better.

Henrito PAlomo

9/11/2014 07:20:02 am

To Matei
Way too much writing. Shorten it up again and its fine

Eduardo

9/11/2014 07:20:11 am

To Bethel Zecharias:
1. I like your rules because your rules are not too short and or long. It was just the right size. Also, your rules were very detailed and I had understood each and every rule. It is great how you added a background and some color for your classroom rules to stand out.
2. In order for you to improve your ‘10 rules of the computer lab’, I think that you should increase the font size in for them to stand out. Also, I recommend you to highlight, bold, and or put on italics important statement in your rules. For instance “ALWAYS SAVE YOUR WORK” Since the rules are based off of a computer lab, you should’ve added a rule displaying that ‘one should not abuse the computer because it is costly to replace parts, the computer and monitor itself. Finally you could’ve added more color to the background to make it stand out. Overall, your 10 Computer lab rules were great an it only needed some minor fixes.
To Elizabeth Snugovsky:
1. Overall, your rules were great and detailed. I like how you elaborated on them for detail and they were very easy to read. I like how you added the pictures so students could understand what you meant.
2. To improve your work, I recommend you to make the title larger and bolder to catch the eye of students. Also, you can change the color of the background and or add a picture as the background. I noticed that there were some misspelled works such as “When going to the bathroom, be quit” Instead of ‘quit’ it should be replaced with ‘Quiet’ Next time, just keep an eye on your spelling mistakes.
To Minsu Kim:
1. I like how you bolded the main points of the rules and then you elaborated on them below. With bolding the main points, students can clearly see the rules and can also focus on them. The rules were also short and sweet. Furthermore, I liked how you added the pictures so students knew what you were talking about.
2. I recommend you add more color into your rules. Also, you can add more color by adding more pictures, and changing the background from grey to a blue, and or any color of your preference. Finally, I recommend you make the title larger because it should be the first thing noticed when a student sees the rules.
To Mark Hernandez:
1. I like how you added the colors on your 10 computer lab rules it can easily catch the eye of students. I also like how you added the pictures of computers. The descriptions of the rules were short and sweet.
2. I recommend you to improve on elaborating on your rules because sometimes student will not get what you mean. Also you can add more pictures for more color. Add pictures like mouses, and things that match the descriptions of your rules.
To Dante Orlando:
1. I like the use of colors on your 10 computer lab rules. I also liked how you change the color of things you want to stress on. You changed the color from red to black and underlined it. Also, the title was very attracting and caught my eye at first glance. I like how you added a lot of pictures.
2. I recommend you to change the color of the background to add more light to your rules and probably more pictures. Also you can add a picture as the background to add more color. Finally, you should elaborate more on your description because others will not understand what you mean.

Anastasiia

9/11/2014 07:20:26 am

To Bethel Zecharias:
I really like your rules and how after each one you explained the consequences of not following that rule. I suggest that you make your font less bold because it’s kind of hard to read your rules.
To Natalie Santoro
I like how you made the rules stand out, and then elaborated on them in a different font. I suggest that you add a background to your rules to make it seem more presentable.
To Madelene Casciato
I like how your rules look neat and colorful at the same time. I wish that you would of inserted a background to make it more appealing.
To Dante Orlando
I like you rules and how you’ve inserted a bunch of pictures but I really suggest that you elaborate more on your rules to make them a bit more descriptive.
To Michael Filomene
I like your rules and how you made them seem appealing. I wish that you’ve thought changed the last rule because the rules that we’re writing are meant to be followed and writing “Follow all rules” isn’t really necessary.

henrito Palomo

9/12/2014 04:56:30 am

To Robbie,
Your project was done efficiently and your rules stood out and were easy to read. I really like how you put pictures to accompany the title but I think you should have put some for the rules as well.
Overall, your assignment was good, just be sure to look for any spelling and grammar errors.

Henrito Palomo

9/12/2014 05:02:43 am

Dear Michael,
I can tell your project was completed with some effort and I like some of the rules you put in it such as “Take responsibility for your actions and work.” It shows honesty.
I think you should proofread your work more efficiently because there are many spelling errors. For example: "Don’t distract your pears when they are trying to listen." Pears are a fruit. You meant peers. Just work on your spelling and go into further detail and you’ll do better next time.

Dominic

9/12/2014 05:25:41 am

To Calvin Tran
1) What I like about your rules are that they are easy to understand, the font is basic so it is easy to read.
2) However your rules are too general and do not go in depth.

To Johannah Santiago
1) What I like about your rules are the images, because they are vibrant and work well with the rules.
2) However, I suggest that you work on spacing because one rule was on two pages.

To Cameron Giraldi
1) What I like about your rules are that you emphasized the key points of every rule in red.
2) However, I suggest that you choose other images because they seemed repetitive.

To Mark Hernandez
1) What I like about your rules is that the rules are simple but effective, in other words they are easy to understand.
2) However, I suggest that you chose images that are not copyright because it take away from the rules.
To Dimitri Adamis
1) What I like about your rules are that each one is well explained and is justified.
2) However, I suggest that you change your background image because it makes the rules difficult to read.

Bethel Zecharias

9/12/2014 05:25:42 am

Open 5 Rules of Managers in Assignment.
Comment on 5 other Rules of Managers
• 1. What do you like about the rules?
• 2. Provide critical feedback to the student. (What could be improved?)
• Example: To student ***, I like your rules because ..... I suggest that you ......... because ....
To Anastasiia Viunyk
I really like your rules they really help keep the class organized. My favourite rule was the seventh one it tells everyone that they are responsible for the area that we are working in. Something that you can do to improve is to add more pictures on your page to better explain each rule.
To Victoria Leva
I love how you said your rule and them went into greater detail; it helps people understand the rule better. Something that you can improve on is to make sure that you have the right spelling and to add more pictures or a background design to the page to make it more eye catching.
To Natalie Santoro
I love how you said your rule and them went into greater detail; it helps people understand the rule better. I also liked how you used the colour red because it made the paper more eyes catching. Something that you can do to improve is to make sure you do a word check because you have green underlining.
To Sabrina Gargaro
I really like how your page is very colourful and incudes a lot of pictures, it really helps to catch the reader’s attention. Something that can help to make your rules even better is to elaborate on them; maybe you can talk about what will happen if you don’t follow the rules.
To Eduardo Ibarra
I really like how you put the large picture in the background; it really makes the words stand out. Also you have great descriptions for each rule it can tell people why it is important to follow them. Maybe something that you can do to improve is to add smaller pictures to go with some of the rules.

Madelene

9/12/2014 05:30:44 am

Francesco
You have 3 pictures of the same thing. It is kind of boring.
From: Madelene
Natalie
It looks good. But there is too much writing.
From: Madelene

Julia
It is very boring. Next time you should add pictures and you should leave the background white.
From: Madelene

Dante
It looks good, but the title is too busy. It catches your eye to much and the reader won’t focus on the message your trying to send about the rules in the lab.
From: Madelene

Calvin
It is very organized, but too plain.
From: Madelene

victoria leva

9/12/2014 05:59:29 am

To: Natalie Santoro
I like your rules because they are very effective and provide a clear and reasonable description. I suggest that you add more pictures and use less colour because the red pops a lot and makes the reader pay attention to those words only. More pictures would have an effect on the reader to understand things in an easier way.

To: Kyle Insigne
I like your rules because they were very simple. I suggest you put more of a description after stating your rule(s) because someone may look at your rules and not understand the consequences if they do not follow them.

To Mark Dibittista
I like your rules because they were very thought out and clear. But I suggest that you put more effort in and provide a description because they are not as clear and understandable as they could be with a description.

To: Dimitri Adamis
I like your rules because they were very thought out and unique. I suggest that you add fewer colours and put in a description and more pictures because a lot of people are more visual and like to see pictures that describe what is being told or written.

To: Mark hernandez.
I like that your rules were very effective and well stated. I suggest that you use more pictures and write a description because there are very few words and not very descriptive.

Kristian

9/18/2014 05:12:14 am

To Mark
You work is very neatly done, and well written. I would recommend that you use more graphics and different types of fonts for your writing. although its not very detailed, the writing is good and well written.
To Nicholas
Your work is neat and formatted very good. I would recommend to use more than two graphics to display your Rules of management. You explanations are good, but can be more explained and developed, making your topic more intriguing.
To Dimitri
Your work is very well done. The picture behind the words is very good and the rules are very well written. One suggestion I would make is to make the words more visible because the words don't contrast well with the background. Overall it was very well done.
To Kyle
I find you work was very neatly done and formatted well. I thought that bolding the DO and DONT were a good idea and it showcase what to do and what not to do. One suggestion I would make to explain your work more and use more graphics and pictures to explain your rules.
To Minsu
You work was very well done. I personallt think that you work can be formatted better because there is pictures on the bottom of each picture. The incorporation of the graphics is good and the grey back ground is good. Overall it is a well wtitten.

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